Sunday, 13 November 2011

cf Feedback - planning

Cameron - L3+ /4-
You started very well with an outstanding video analysis; however you are not commenting on other posts and you need to contribute more detailed reflection and analysis on key processes such as audience research, pitch, film shoots. You have been organised in your shoots, excellent time management, however the blog is the evidence of the planning process and you must prioritise it. There is almost no detail on the editing process so far and no reflection on drama shoot? Your construction is strong, but you are throwing away marks here - get organised!

Alex - L3+
You have completed necessary tasks, but they are a little brief. Research is well informed by critical theory, but reflections are proficient, not excellent. Look at other groups' and see level of detail being included.

Jack L3+/4-
Excellent research and you are commenting / using the blog collaboratively. See comments above for missing elements

To secure a L4 planning - the following must be completed:
1. detailed reflection from all of you on contributions to construction - direction, camera man, editing, issues with performance, mise-en-scene etc. This is particularly vital for shoots, however the post-production process must also be illustrated with screen shots, rough cuts etc

2. Draft mock-ups of print work from all of you

3. Use of ICT - background image must be your own design, posts need more multi-media elements, embedded clips, images, links

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